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Subject: Seven Tips for a Better Resume from VetJobs/ . VetJobs is working with to improve veteran   > candidate resumes.
Want more interviews?  Maybe you need your resume reviewed    ( by a professional. Job search in tough times like now demand polished resumes more than ever.  If you are attempting to write your own resume, these seven tips are important to follow:    SEVEN TIPS TO RESUME SUCCESS:

1. Select the best format.    While most resumes ( are written in a history chronological format, often a better technique is to evenly balance between skill set description, achievements, and employment.

2. Find a balance between wordiness and lack of detail.   Employers need to see details about your work history and experience, but they don’t need to know everything.  Keep information germane to the goal of attaining an interview.  Eliminate information that is not related and  will not have direct impact on winning the interview.

3. Do not use personal pronouns.  “I”, “me”, “my”, “mine”, “our” should not be on a resume. Resumes are written in first person (implied). Example: For your prior job description, instead of writing: “I hired, trained and supervised a team of assistant managers and sales associates” you would instead state that you “Hired, trained and supervised a team of assistant managers and sales associates.” Fragment sentences are perfectly acceptable on a resume and actually preferred.

4. Use numerical symbols for numbers.  While we are taught in school to spell out numbers less than ten, in resume writing, numerical symbols serve as “eye stops” and are a much better method. Instead of writing “Developed a dynamic team of eight consultants.” it would be much more advantageous to state “Developed a dynamic team of 8 consultants.”

5. Think “accomplishments” rather than “job duties”.  What makes you stand out from the crowd? How did you come up with a way to do things better, more efficiently, or for less cost? What won honors for you? Information such as this is vital, will grab attention, and put your resume at the top of the list.

6. Keep it positive.  Reason for leaving a job and setbacks do not have a place on a resume.   Employers are seeking people who can contribute and have successfully performed in the past.  Concentrate on communicating these issues and avoid any detracting information.

7. Be phone savvy.  Many first time job interviews are conducted via telephone rather than in person.  Make sure you are prepared for that telephone call when it arrives, and make sure you have a resume that will make the phone ring!

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